Learning a new language at an early age is helpful for children. Is it more positive for their future aspect or have some adverse effects? Agree or disagree?

Learning new language at childhood plays a vital role in every one's life. Learning different languages are important while travelling to other parts of the world. I strongly agree that learning new languages is very useful.

To begin with, there are several advantages of learning new languages at small ages firstly, it is useful to converse with different people from different parts of the world. For example, people in India will speak mostly Hindi so people who come to India from overseas must know the language of Hindi. Secondly, he can visit all parts of the world. Thirdly, it is most useful for their future who are going to do a job in different locations of the world.

On the other hand some people disobeys that learning new languages at an early age because they think that causes loss of their own language. Moreover, they think it is stressful because it is too small age to learn difficult languages. For instance, people in Andhra Pradesh speak telugu it is the most toughest language to learn and speak so, it causes from stress to the child at small ages of their life.

Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and going by my personal opinion I will state in my conclusion that, learning new languages at an early age give more information and makes life easy when travels to other parts of the globe.

Votes
Average: 7.1 (3 votes)
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PTE_Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 300, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'toughest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: toughest
...n Andhra Pradesh speak telugu it is the most toughest language to learn and speak so, it caus...
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Line 6, column 300, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the toughest'.
Suggestion: most the toughest
...n Andhra Pradesh speak telugu it is the most toughest language to learn and speak so, it caus...
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Line 8, column 78, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ints discussed till now and going by my personal opinion I will state in my conclusion that, lea...
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore information and makes life easy when travels to other parts of the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72573839662 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39079340561 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523206751055 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8883222355 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.818181818 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1818181818 7.25397266985 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314858269562 0.242375264174 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126137199172 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688606360474 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192661090385 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438463108528 0.0609392437508 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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