"For less developed countries, disadvantages in tourism are greater than advantages". Discuss, give your opinion and examples.
For less developed countries disadvantages in tourism are greater than advantages was always a debatable topic. Many people state that tourism has many disadvantages in under developed countries. It is completely agreed that there are lot of challenges and problems in less developed areas. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why tourism is detriment with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, it is said that many underdeveloped countries are high risk for tourists. This is apparent since last few decades. For example, recently in Bangladesh a tourist from Japan and another from Italy were shot dead by the Islamic terrorist State group. This shows that underdeveloped countries are not safe as they lack security measures. Thus, in such type of countries tourist industry has more disadvantages than advantages.
Secondly, there are few aspects of tourism that may harmful to a country. For instance, a country may suffer from the loss of their own traditional culture. This is caused by a people in a country changing their lifestyle, customs and language in order to serve effectively the visitors. In addition, tourists often carry expensive objects like camera, smart phones and electrical gadgets and are unaware of surroundings, they make good targets for theft. Crime also increases as a result of the increases in drugs and prostitution.
According to the arguments aforementioned, it can be concluded that due to lack of security measures and loss of their own culture tourism in under developed countries have many disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.384 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01536332803 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2707314914 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188786223039 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646252419121 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897564439289 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114544845543 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104678403012 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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