the letter of the year 2070
Tien Giang, Viet Nam
02nd month, 2022
Nguyen Thi Ngoc Thi
Can Tho, Viet Nam
Dear Thi of the year 2070.
Do you alive ? do our parent alive?
I’m Thi of the year 2022!. Are you surprised? I think you’ll remember this time again.
I’m trying to make our life better.
I’m 19 years old has
- No boyfriend, no money, no skills for job, EQ is lacking,….
- Sensitive, quiet, afraid to communicate,….
- Nothing in hands
- Boring when studying college
- Disappointed with myself.
- Less confident in life.
In 2070, everything will be ok? It’s sure ok, it’s sure improved, it’s sure successful.
From 2022 to 2070 is 48 years. In 48 years, I’ll trying my best to you better.
In that years you’ll have
- a good husband, two excellent children, a beautiful house with family
- a successful career, when you retire there will be a pension
- when you read letter, you’ll feel satisfied with what you have
- having a modern plane, you can in plane to go everywhere without controlling because you have a private pilot.
- You will enjoy the house in a super beautiful villa, in front of which there is a super luxury lake.
- You have genius children.
Don’t forget this letter! I’ll send you through time app.
Check to see. Do the above wishes come true?
If that’s true, then congratulations on living a life in vain!
Good bye myself in the past and welcome myself in the future!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...r Thi of the year 2070. Do you alive ? do our parent alive? I’m Thi of the year ...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I’m trying to make our life better. I’m 19 years old has - No boyfriend, no ...
^
Line 11, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... money, no skills for job, EQ is lacking,…. - Sensitive, quiet, afraid to communi...
^^
Line 12, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... Sensitive, quiet, afraid to communicate,…. - Nothing in hands - Boring when stu...
^^
Line 18, column 49, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'll' requires the base form of the verb: 'try'
Suggestion: try
... to 2070 is 48 years. In 48 years, I’ll trying my best to you better. In that years y...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95020746888 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56663021785 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647302904564 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6551724138 174% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.3924192635 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.2272727273 104.977214359 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.9545454545 20.9669160288 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 7.25397266985 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.12807881773 581% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161557964937 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402058844434 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638756920084 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501739660924 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945446635195 0.0609392437508 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 12.6369458128 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 53.1260098522 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.9458128079 34% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.32886699507 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.94827586207 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.5123152709 38% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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