long distance communication is helpful for both doctors and patients. Give your opinion about the statement.
It is irrefutable that advances in communication technology have contributed vastly towards the medical industry to improve the reachability of patients with effective and faster methods. In my opinion, not only it has increased effectiveness of whole interaction, but also increased the cost benefits attached to the whole engagement between the doctors and patients. This essay will further elaborate on the advantages of such improvements with the long-distant communication facilities between the doctors and patients and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
firstly, wireless communications have reached far rural areas where no doctor visits such areas even once a year. Availability of long distant communications has enabled them to contact their doctors on promptly basis and look for advise over their symptoms. Moreover, as for the latest survey conducted, it concluded that 80% of the generic diseases does not require in patient checking in order to subscribe medicine. Further particular survey outlined that many patients are getting benefits out of this system and it introduce far more cost benefits in countries which are still at the developing state. Reachability of doctors in such countries has definetely adding value to the chain while these options can be easily used during emergency situations.
Furthermore, not only long distant communications add value to patients, but it also allows doctors to focus on in-house patients more often having to spend less time with their out patients. Additionally, previously said survey also highlighted that often times minor illnesses like flu, cold, high blood pressure did not require meeting doctor in person to have visibility over the illness.
In the view of argument outline above, one can conclude that long distant communications brings myriad of advantages for both patients and doctors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, moreover, so, still, thus, while, as for, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57342657343 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98909946874 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.3344666214 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 144.909090909 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208181674039 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788180216485 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547023806027 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132071381613 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015326650048 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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