The majority of television news
Nowadays weather you watch the news on television or elsewhere its all the same content you as a viewer end up viewing from the media such as crime, murder, war, famine are some the categories being reported around the world in the media but there are positive side's to the news as well but not much. In this essay, I will argue that there is, balance between positive and negative news.
We the masses love seeing a positive view of our selves being portrayed in the media. Even though we need more positive role models of good human behavior so that we can use it as a tool to create more people who would emulate this in accordance with our good values towards the system. For an example we do more good deeds and display kindness this may reflect a positive message towards the audience.
With bad news spreading everywhere and such examples as war, famine, murder, political turmoil and natural disasters just to name a few are such events keep just so happen so easily within our daily lives and whereas seeing good news is a kind of rare thing when you come to think of it and if we are to try solve these problems, we need to be constantly reminded that they exist.
Finally, in this essay has argued that there are that people react depending on the kind of information given to them of world events and that we see and in my opinion, we must have a balance of television news, more good than bad and could be a effective way of molding people and our society too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, well, whereas, kind of, such as, all the same, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43223443223 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20625359184 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.5024630542 190% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.106998054 50.4703680194 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.857142857 104.977214359 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.9669160288 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.25397266985 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13976072984 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675713656935 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637093438043 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986614186116 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708369985287 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.9458128079 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.3980295567 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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