Many companies involve employees in decision making policy. Some people think that it is important for the progression for the company. To what extent do you agree or disgree?

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Many companies involve employees in decision making policy. Some people think that it is important for the progression for the company. To what extent do you agree or disgree?

Nowadays, many organizations involve employees in decision making, which has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. It is agreed that employees are productive assets of the company, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that they should not be involved in crucial decisions. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons why employees are important for the decision making process. The most conspicuous one stems from the fact that inputs from the employees rectify the shortcomings and irregularities in the internal processes which hinder the growth of companies. Moreover, when an employee participates in major decisions, it adds value to them and motivates them to work harder. Thus, it shows that involving employees in decision making increase the effficiency in the processes and lead to effective mangement.
Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of employees in decisions and the most alarming one roots from the fact that employees, sometimes sell the confidential information of the company. For instance, employees pass the sensitive information to the rivals and pose a threat to its reputation. Hence, empoyee’s participation in decision making leads to negative copnsequences.
In the light of the above discussion, it is concluded that employee should be involved in decison of the organization as they contribute towards its success.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they contribute towards its success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60944206009 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16341913372 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583690987124 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.003213843 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24820490575 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939141098347 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650611093408 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136550047669 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458923430982 0.0609392437508 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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