In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong. While other consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
The implication of children’s are engaged in different kinds of paid work and some people regard this as completely wrong. But other considers it a valuable work experience and learning and taking responsibility, which is fairly debated has now gained further attention from numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
At the outset, there are diverse reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the facts that if children’s do the paid work then they distract from the study. Furthermore, children’s do the paid work and get the over burden of the house responsibilities and other works.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing views and trend to believe that when the children’s do the work in small age then they get the work experience and they do not face any difficulty in their life. Moreover, children’s know the value of the hard work in their life and also know the value of money.
The importance of children’s are engaged in different kinds of paid work and some people regards this as completely wrong but other consider it a valuable work experience can be debated, the facts remains that there were several factors that lead to this theme and matter. It is depend upon the children’s and on parents who encourage their children’s to work in little age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...at lead to this theme and matter. It is depend upon the children's and on parents...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... children's to work in little age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14207782546 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.876974716 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.7 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406483915428 0.242375264174 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177550832828 0.0925447433944 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15607443154 0.071462118173 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270214043675 0.151781067708 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120644274955 0.0609392437508 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.