In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. discuss and give your own opinion?
The importance effect of general facilities, Which was always debatable, but has become more controversial. The sustainable influence of general facilities has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent years. In my opinion, the former latter appears to be more rational and this essay will further elaborate my reasons. for forming the positive negative affect of this rend and thus lead to be a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons general facilities but most conspicuous one stems from the fact that educational and medical workers are able to enhanc their working skills significantly compare to those who stay in cities. As an illustration one problem is associated with this phenomenon is that people who have lived in the remote areas.
Nevertheless according to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of general facilities, but the most alarming one is rooted is the fact that everyone should respect the fact that individual are entiteled do anything they want. In addition if all teachers work in city schools.
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of general facilities is prominent and the way i believe that the young teachers and doctor sent to rural place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23474178404 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78596470364 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2258782698 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.888888889 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174210645667 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624553043723 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423117009161 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998188493517 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368512053808 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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