tobacco should be banned or not.
These days, smoking cigarettes have become a major issue in entire world. The use of tobacco put the bad impacts on our health because it causes so many problems. It is a form of drug and it is mainly two types. First is active smoker, in which a person who smokes the cigarette and second is passive smoker, who is near the person who is doing smoking but not himself is engaged in smoking. Some argue that government has the role to solve this problem and some confess that it is the responsibility of the individual to curb this nuisance.
There are so many reasons why a person does smoking, because some people having some stress on their mind due to some reason like financial problems, bad company and so on. It also put some bad impact on their health like if they use tobacco excessively, it creates serious problems like lungs damage, high blood pressure and so forth and sometime it causes death.
To curb this nuisance, the onus is on the government, the government must take precautions like to ban the tobacco or cigarettes like drugs in some extent. If a person takes tobacco and cigarette, the government should impose heavy taxes or fine who do it in public, not for that who purchases or takes these kinds of drugs but also include who sell these kinds of drugs. On the other hand, it is also the responsibility of the individual that to shun these types of habits or save their life and preserve their heath or body from precarious diseases like asthma and lungs disorder.
To conclude, it can be reiterated that tobacco or cigarette is bad for our health. It should be banned but not totally because this is also the form of economy and some people do job in tobacco making companies, therefore if higher authority totally ban these types of drugs, it may create unemployment so rather some logical steps should be taken.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on their health like if they use tobacco excessively, it creates serious problems...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 329.0 242.827586207 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63221884498 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45172531721 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8361618172 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181778447664 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677707741849 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951972620954 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132230303033 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14021832249 0.0609392437508 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.5 Out of 90
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