In recent times, there is a tendency among the common people to migrate from rural areas to urban areas. Some people make this decision due to prevalence of ample job opportunities, while others settle there for better education and health-care facilities. However, this also brings about some drawbacks, such as affecting agricultural production and aggravation of already persisting overpopulation problems.
Rural to urban migration has a number of causative factors. One of the most obvious causes is that urban city centers provide lots of job opportunities to its residents. This is because, majority of the companies like to build up their headquarters and offices within the city areas, which opens up plenty of working scopes for the employees. For example, youngsters in Bangladesh leave their countryside houses and settle in city areas with the hopes of getting a well-paid job. Another reason behind this shifting is that cities are not only equipped with prominent educational institution but also internationally accredited hospitals. Consequently, people want to move there in order to enjoy better standard of life.
Although rural-urban migration can prove to be advantageous for individual’s purposes, there are some negative sides that the society has to deal with. With an increased rate of migration taking place, the agricultural sector will likely to suffer the most. The reason behind this is that there would be lack of manpower available in the rural areas, which would result in decreased production of crops; thereby, ultimately causing scarcity of foods. India, for instance, is witnessing a devastating effect due to shortage of food that has originated from the excessive shifting of farmers to city areas. Another potential problem is that if all the rural people decided to move toward towns, then cities and towns would face population explosion. In other words, these megacities would scramble to accommodate the increased population as well as to provide them with employment.
In conclusion, since there is higher probability of getting lucrative jobs and enhanced lifestyle in metropolis, people tend to show greater interest of moving into big cities, which, in turn, destroys the agricultural side and breeds numerous overpopulation problems in urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 31.9359605911 197% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1207.87684729 162% => OK
No of words: 356.0 242.827586207 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49438202247 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 3.92707691288 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96812698614 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 139.433497537 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 379.143842365 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0546570164 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208580390343 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067438748353 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568651987859 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124002594129 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260789970134 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 55.0591133005 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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