In many cultures, the priority is given to marriage over employment. What's your opinion on getting married without worrying about getting a job?
Marriage is far beyond a ritual or a ceremony; for some, it is one of the major milestones of life whereas, for others, it is finding a companion for a lifetime. There are many cultures in the world that put marriage on the top of the list wherein the parents force their adolescents to get married soon after they complete their primary or secondary education. In such cases, gallants and damsels are neither physically mature nor economically. I totally agree with the statement.
Marriage comes with a lot of responsibilities where a practical approach to the relationships is of paramount importance. Getting married without finding a job will be like heading for a war without any weapon. And, once married, a jobless person is trapped between the devil and the deep blue sea; you simply cannot chicken out of the wedding knot.
Financial stability is one of the most important things that each one of us is aiming at. It takes months and years to settle financially and be ready to take on newer responsibilities of adding 'another life' to your life. Another nail in the coffin is when the couple is pressurized by their relatives and parents to have a kid. Growing prices of commodities and FMCGs, a bringing up of a kid requires more funds which don't come without being economically stable.
All in all, I espouse to the notion of getting married only when one is economically stable and mentally mature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g up of a kid requires more funds which dont come without being economically stable....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8237704918 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85338629642 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0509224474 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0833333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153573019258 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461849147172 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639995530659 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900253095506 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393763620704 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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