Some people believe that exploring outer space is important. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money.
In my point of view, I am agree with the statement “exploring outer space is important”. Nowdays, some people
might not be consider about what would happen in the future. By exploring outer space, we could describe and
detect the situation over there. It’s very important that we could see how far the outer space growth and the
effect of global, instead of doing nothing by save our money indeed. We learn many thing in space and may be
make another place. The moral thing about this case is different person has a different perspective to look after
their future life. We need to spend money for our future and knowledges. Don’t to spend the moni to war, break
building and an kill. Spend the moni to explor and make plan for future. Also another enegy in space.
We need to know others people in space. May be other far the outer space. We need to find. May ne they come
here and make war. Exploring outer space is important to learn. May be we need space. There are more people,
more building house every day. In the future we need other place to live. Space is other place if we know.
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- Psychology is a natural science that describes and explains the physiological and sensory aspects of human behavior. It studies the causes, conditions, and immediate consequences of sensations and emotions. Psychologists view the human mind as a function 70
- Which of the following values do you think is most important to teach a young child Being honest Being helpful Being patient 70
- The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer. 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
In my point of view, I am agree with the statement 'exploring oute...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...hing by save our money indeed. We learn many thing in space and may be make another place...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd the moni to war, break building and an kill. Spend the moni to explor and make...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...oni to explor and make plan for future. Also another enegy in space. We need to kno...
^^^^
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...ring outer space is important to learn. May be we need space. There are more people, ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57920792079 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31277146977 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3775514654 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.6842105263 104.977214359 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6315789474 20.9669160288 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.21052631579 7.25397266985 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 2.91625615764 480% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296588740947 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108406579311 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958390091375 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132631579127 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835696915362 0.0609392437508 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 12.6369458128 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 53.1260098522 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.9458128079 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 11.5310837438 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.16 8.32886699507 74% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 55.0591133005 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.5123152709 57% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.