Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the statement that "Many offenders commit after serving the first punishment". There is a
wiedspread worry that this willl only lead to a myriad of concerns in the world. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages to above the statement which
relates to the facts "Commit more crimes after serving" using a pragmatic approuch.
To commences with, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. The most importance one not only includes betterment of the society, but also includes the positive
development of every individual to the planet. Because of countless benifits, not only one can gain more when its comes to being successful and effictive, but they can also
improve their efficiency, productivity, and quality of life with great deals evfficacy and convenience.
Another crucial factor of the aforementioned is that it is only likely to assist one of flourish, progress, and excel in the variety of disciplines.
Consequently in the system adheres individual horizons, skills acquire qualities that the statement such commitment, dedication, and perseverance. Hence,
many are favour of the facts thta "Measures be taken in this problem because many more crimes after serving the first punishment to
tackle this problems".
Lastly, in my opinion is the government of Australia is taking a great initiative its educating to citizens on the negative impacts of the statement that "Many offenders
commit more crimes after serving the first punishment". Citizens are being encourged to follow the applicable laws as well as rules and regulations to foster peaces,
prosperity, productivity, and efficiency and the positive environment in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, lastly, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60727272727 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24442305992 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4643517281 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.12807881773 315% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369426060257 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122856396038 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156553951227 0.071462118173 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130275772323 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149958505664 0.0609392437508 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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