Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals and Society. To what extent do you agree?
The substantial influence of social networking sties has sparked controversy over recent years. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about social networking sites such as Facebook has massive impact on individual and society or not. This essay will discuss the both sides of the argument and I will share my opinion at the end.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons why does Facebook plays harmful to individuals and environment, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that fake news getting viral across everywhere. In addition, people will get mislead with the false information's shared on these sites. As an illustration, irrelevant news which is contradict to truth shared among people has worse impact. Therefore, social networking sites creates bad influence to independent as well as to atmosphere.
On the other hand, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that few positives in social networking sites also as significant factor the most predominant one lies in the fact that transparency with people. Furthermore, in case of any hidden truth been identified among anything will be posted in public to create awareness on the problem. For instance, corruption related videos gone viral and created impact in between people. For this reason, Facebook related sites should be encouraged to create better society.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that social networking site really creating worse impact to society and individual or not. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend that has discrepancies which needs to corrected to create better livable environment to every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43346007605 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81397593843 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3391742384 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.25397266985 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228123463634 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817206667147 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748874874099 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142803686468 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336836863536 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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