Many people think that the place you were born affects your success in later life. What is your opinion about the relevance of one’s place of birth upon future success?
In recent years, there has been a dramatic rise in successful people originating from developed nations. While some people believe that citizens of wealthy and technologically advanced nations are naturally poised to be provided with numerous opportunities, others oppose this idea. This essay will discuss both sides and provide reasons why these two are inexorably linked.
To begin with, one strong argument for those that believe successful people have no dependence on the country of their origin is that they claim that other factors like hard work, discipline, risk-taking ability and consistent efforts play an even more pivotal role. For instance, Usain Bolt, who is a Jamaican athlete, was born in a relatively poor country, but that did not dissuade him from being the best sprinter in the world. Moreover, the place of birth can only provide the necessary means to survive and exposure to the outside world but does not guarantee a promising career.
However, there are several arguments in favour of one's birthplace being essential for success. They not only provide favourable policies and facilities but also work actively to shape an individual's future. Countries like China, for instance, have special schools designed to identify young talent and provide the necessary support to transform them into international level sports stars. Several talented sportsmen opt-out as they are unable to support their families financially during their early careers. In addition, Western countries have several prominent academic institutions that churn out the best scientists, researchers and professionals every year.
To conclude, despite several factors being responsible towards an individual's successful life, the place of origin plays a cardinal part by providing facilities to nurture talent from an early age. In my opinion, the place of origin is one of the key determiners of a promising career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...here are several arguments in favour of ones birthplace being essential for success....
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Line 13, column 64, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...veral factors being responsible towards an individuals successful life, the place of origin pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51351351351 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78469382921 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64527027027 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0283943045 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126305751768 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473235195755 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479917362975 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084322461016 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476599822936 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.