Majority of people believe that the place in which they are brought up, influence the success of the person. I my viewpoint there is a deep impact of the native region on the person’s success. The region, in which a person grows, provides a conducive environment, ample amount of opportunities to learn and perform and provides access to multiple resources and facilities easily.
It has been seen that every person has strong memories of his childhood. A favourable environment in childhood helps the child to explore his passion and the area of interest. If this eagerness is nurtured properly, through a good environment, the child develops confidence to show up his talent when he grows up to an adult. To illustrate, Thomas Edison, Bill Gates, Dhirubhai Ambani are the perfect example who were nurtured with a helpful environment.
Secondly, it is noticed that a particular type of talent, hails from a specific area. For Instance, Brazil and Argentina has produced many legendary footballers. Similarly, in the field of academics, many Indians have brought laurels to the country. When a person is successful in a distinctive domain, he becomes a source of inspiration for many people and gradually the development of skills, resources and facilities starts picking up and opens the gates for many aspirants.
Finally, one can say that, when talent gets right amount of encouragement and environment to breed, it takes the shape of success and often achieves the impossible feat.
- “In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples 77
- Some people believe that it is better for children to learn a second language at primary school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this statement. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 77
- If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which subject will you choose? Discuss this with regards to the roles that governments, corporations and individuals play. 85
- Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. Give your opinion on this matter. 55
- The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education - Albert Einstein. Discuss this statement and give your opinion. 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19834710744 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95464659135 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5552310477 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156461389813 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530789740493 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630749394136 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083979859668 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806538319316 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.