Is tourism in less developed countries an advantage or disadvantage? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is conspicuous that tourist industry has grown enormously over the last five decades and people are travelling from one country to another for many reasons. Considering this, some people opine that tourism has tremendous benefits to the developing countries that host it, while others argue it has lots of drawbacks. This essay will give assertion on both sides of contention before delivering a plausible conclusion.
To begin, there are significant benefits that tourism brings to a country. Firstly, a thriving tourist industry implies an increasing need for a variety of services such as hotels, transport, restaurants, and entertainment. This eventually results in increase in a number of jobs being created for people who lack a college education. Secondly, tourism also helps to understand the foreign culture more deeply. For instance, many tourists go to India and live there for many years and get first-hand experience of its culture. Moreover, tourism is a "Green Industry” and generates a low level of pollution.
On the other hand, there are some harmful aspects of tourism. A country may suffer from the loss of their traditional culture. For instance, youngsters in Third World nations try to copy a lifestyle, customs, and language of tourists. This may vanish their traditional culture radically. Furthermore, to gravitate more tourists and profits, the government are doing deforestation and building attractive places, because of it, carbon contents are increasing and causing much health-related problems.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, a nation should seek to develop its tourism industry because it boosts its economy and improves relationship with other countries. However, proper rules and regulations must be created by higher authorities to protect nation’s environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64981949458 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16165115152 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.032480909 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116247753982 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374999357416 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343557722538 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699829100094 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375877560934 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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