Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Nowadays, the influence of the accomplished person or an appropriate region has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question, “whether a sound area and a successful person has the positive effect on the prosperity of others or not?”. It is a widely held view that the social environment and is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that a secure community or accomplished person plays a vital role in everybody’s life. First and foremost is that living in a country with acceptable social structure contribute youth to know their abilities as well interest to find job opportunity and enjoy high living standard. Secondly, it can be argued that interaction with successful peers that have achieved remarkable position will encourage others to follow their approach in terms of education and business. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that peer pressure to commit crime or violence acts can tempt youth to deteriorate their future life.
However, there is no doubt that being under effects of people and region provides people with various points. It should be taken into account that the majority of prosperous scientists could reach the summit of prosperity just with hardworking. Moreover, it is quite clear that people are able to increase their earning capacity or promote the education just by enough personal and intellectual skills.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the facilities of regions and the number of successful people must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...son or an appropriate region has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26599326599 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99200641597 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6778098671 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.181818182 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19438216211 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703268183623 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835060345985 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117296296252 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529067065624 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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