Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
successful people there are around the world. Actually the idea to think if the where they belong affect this success or not, become more controversial. In this essay will going to discuss the topic about how the regions, country or city will be affected if someone wants to be successfully.
First, is important to talk what is the mean for be successfully, because in my opinion to be success is not jus about money,I think that success is complex word when we need to include education, kindness, love, loyalty and for sure be a person that could be achieve a dream, if does matter if the dram if money or not. For example in developing countries that have many rich regions or when the economy is stable and the education is possible, the community have more opportunity to achieve their dream.
However, in countries like mine, where if you don't belong in a kind of region the idea to be successfully will be just a dream, just think if someone want to find a job o create a company, the boundaries to do it are to big in compare with developing countries. For instance, third country like Colombia, a country with a hard past, where children die every day because they don't have food or water, is a sad example that regions affect successful person. On the other hand, In my opinion the region where you belong won't be affect your success, if the person just want to do it, the attitude and the hard job are an important way to do it.
To conclude, if a person think that regions affect success life, just with think like that never will be a success person, so, many people still thinking that to be success or achieve something the most important think is the region where you belong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, so, still, third, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56351791531 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46588625439 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482084690554 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1015911875 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.9669160288 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.25397266985 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33085454535 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151794790145 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993275368733 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229256531605 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106594141164 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.