Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished persons in influences on the region he belongs to?
In the modern world, every person want to achieve success. The importance of regions which was always debatable has now become more controversial as many people believe that it effect to a successful person while others reject this notion. I will give my opinions regarding positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are verious reasons for region and areas seiously effect to the carrer of successful people. Firstly, nowadays, mostly people shiffted in urban areas as they know it is quite beneficial for them and their family. In cities the people enjoy super market and different type of product which is not easly avialable in rural areas. The another pivotal aspect is that in urban areas people enjoy the educational facilities as in cities many colleges and universities avialable which provide higher educated which make carrer perfect. However, in rural areas many people not complete their targets with lack of education system and bus facilities.
additionally, In developing areas people enjoy the more job opportunities with higher income. Moreover, in developing areas people do jobs in multinational companies which leads their experience as well as they become more confidential and independent. Besides this, in rural areas people face health care problem as there is lack of hospital because in cities, people take care their health by taking medical treatment from government with free of cost and private hospitals. people also enjoy proper electricity , water facility and transport facility to reach one place to another place.
To sum up, it is clear from aforementioned above that these all facilities are necessary to achieve a goal and being a successful person, so it is true that region and areas effect to a successful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2214532872 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70587725153 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574394463668 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5560738496 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197424866434 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759426615369 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070926293779 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143983079491 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719605040917 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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