People pursue dangerous activities like sky-diving, motorcycle sports, white-water river rafting, etc. Do you support? If yes why, and if not why not?
In present world, mostly young generation try to perfome the dangerous activities such as sky diving, white water river rafting and so on. As mainy people think that it is very risky and government should ban this type of activities. I will give my opinion about both sides in upcoming paragraphs.
To commmence with the reasons that people why pursue dangerous activities. First of all, It is passion of some people as they want to try risky sports activities which enhence their confidence and they also remove the fear. Moreover, mostly youngones try and fully enjoy these activities . Undoubtly, these sports acitivities are risky so it is neccesary that people perfome adventure activities by taking training from an expert and also follow all rules and safety system then they perfome these activities.
On the other side, sometimes due to bad luck, weather problem and accidently people faced difficult situation such as they not control and manage their body. As a result people become handicapture and fail to move their some part of body even it is also a reason of some premature deaths. Moreover, these type risky sport are very expensive as it is not afforable by everyone. the dangrous activities only afforad by rich people as tghey pay high amount of money to take training or coaching from experts .
In conculssion, it is clear that people take traing from experts as they know these types of games as very risky.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94605809129 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53334884226 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4651840238 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155033567718 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616185535556 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694651584851 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942364878969 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547484151874 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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