It is generally argued that success of a person depends upon the environment in which he/she grew up. This is only part of the truth. There are numerous other attributes and qualities far more important and critical for the overall development and success of an individual. Ability of a person, attitude and zeal towards life, resilience to change and challenges, persistence in pursuing goals, burning desire, unrelenting focus are some of the factors which define success of an individual.
Favorable environment does have its own advantage and provide for the development of skills like leadership, teamwork and communication. The behavior of people in the neighborhood, school and college friends affect behavior and skills of a person. These differences can clearly be seen and observed between people from developed and third world countries.
Individual ability and skills in a particular field is what determine quality and outcome of the results. There are numerous of examples in the modern history, where people have attained great success, despite having gone through many challenges and difficulties. Such examples exists in almost all walks of life; politics, sports, education and business etc. It is through their hard work, attitude and perseverance, these people overcome all the challenges and attained success which many coming from most favorable environments and native conditions could not attain.
To conclude, hard work, strong will and perseverance and resilience is what determine success of an individual.
- Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? 77
- Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to. 77
- Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to. 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52100840336 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93292961466 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596638655462 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5377144314 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.25397266985 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146655747206 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496836510491 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418049383775 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809413948177 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016625385723 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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