Many people think regions affect successful persons. What are your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Recently, the effect of regions on person's success has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "does individual’s success depend on their regions?" Whereas it is a widely held view that native regions done not have direct influence on person's achievements, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the society standpoint, native regions are bound up inextricably with birthday place, which indicates they lead to both physical region and grown up environment. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between migration and developed countries as well as an exponential increase in success. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of the peace neighborhood is correlated positively with not only major success but also remarkable accomplishment.
Within the realm of educational system, without the slightest doubt, residential area attribute to facility, in that it would come down to more university, more job opportunity, and lifestyle. A salient example of such attribution is deprived area, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take slum housing for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint migration problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to x, x, and even x. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government, urban areas and range of facilities.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that native regions have strong impact on person's achievements. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74226804124 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23674128358 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3884865765 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21149514753 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552843826717 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843975254122 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125958002767 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086423857213 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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