Many sports stars earn enormous amounts of money. Some people believe that this is fair because these people are talented. Others, however, believe that a person’s salary should be based on his or her contribution to society.
Do you think sports stars deserve the money they earn ? Support your point of view with reasons and/ or examples from your own experience or observations.
It is undeniable that sports have gained popularity these days. While proponents believe that sports stars deserve huge amounts of money, opponents think that there are other professions which contributes more to society. This essay will discuss why sports stars do not merit such high salaries.
There are various reasons which sports stars deserve high salaries. Foremost, is the fact that they have short-lived career and there suffer early burn out. A relevant example would be that many sports stars retire in early thirties as compared to the doctors and teachers who work till their sixties. Thus, it can be seen that sports stars deserve the money they earn due to their short careers.
Nevertheless, some people oppose that doctors and teachers are more worthy and should earn high salaries. It is important to realize that these careers provide fundamental foundation to society. It is well known that teachers are a stepping stone in a child’s development process. By this way, it can be observed that doctors and teachers play a vital role in the welfare of society.
This essay discussed why sports stars should deserve high salaries and other professions are more valuable than sports. In my opinion, sports stars are undeserving of such high pay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 31.9359605911 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48635098799 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7980111082 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.1538461538 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336771538922 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115030822112 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648613470305 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200919199729 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063155505477 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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