Many workers like nurses and teachers should get more pay, especially in recent years people in finance/film
actors and company leaders were paid a larger amount of sum. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
the above statement and what’s your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of some employees' right to have a more income including nurses and tutors in comparison of the other ones like famous people or managers has sparked a heated debate among populations. Although this idea is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of inviduals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several reasons why some paramount jobs including the staff who work in pharmecies and hospitals or schools need to be allocated more wages, and they have lower revenue than bosses and wellknown dwellers like file actors. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these reasons. Firstly, undoubtedly, these people have big responsibilities like upbringing the youths or looking after patients. Financial problems can diminish their consentrations and leads to increase faults.
On the one hand, there is no doubt the idea of enhancing the nurses or teachers' wages due to the comparison of managers or famous citizes has some opponents. they asserted that these particular jobs have the potential of earning more money. Namely, managers deal with challanges and should address an array of difficulties or the prestigious people are n popular in nations and this popularity leads to higher income.
In conclusion, while there are several arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of the idea that governments should allocate higher wages for some jobs like tutors and nurses are far more outweigh their drawbacks.
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| 2018-09-16 | bashirheidari | 96 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...s or famous citizes has some opponents. they asserted that these particular jobs hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31111111111 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90134068627 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3582334295 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084626284102 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301672350213 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265866321553 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546823595185 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123032109474 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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