People with good economic conditions can spend their married life happier. Nowadays, the adults are getting married before having a good job, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be disagreed that marrying to someone before establishing good career can lead to severe problems, while on the other hand stands a perspective that marriage has nothing to do with study and work. This essay will further elaborate on both sides and thus will lead to logical conclusion.
At the very outset, there are myriad of reasons why forming a relationship with someone is not good without having a good job, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that later in life it can lead to major family problems like as, personal conflict and financial burden. Moreover, all these issues can make the life worst for both partners. For example, majority of the person who married without a settlement in their professional career were end their relationship after two years of their marriage. Therefore, being in a relationship is not good without good job and study.
On the other hand stands a perspective that people can live a happy life without even having a required level of qualification and work. This is because both partners should have better understanding with each other to lead a happy life ahead. As an illustration, according to the startling new research seventy percent of couple in India are having no job but still living in their life as other rich people. Hence, good career has nothing to do with personal life.
In view of above outlined arguments, one can conclude that good financial condition and better qualification plays a vital role in leading a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98269896194 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67539171202 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0329235043 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185777156988 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761227896669 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616410373086 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112987957443 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077681364369 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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