Young people to imitate the lifestyle of well known actors and sports personalities. In my opinion, this has demerits. A number of them are luxurious life style .Unfortunately, They inspire middle-class and teenagers who can hardly afford this, to adopt the same life style.
Celebrities wear expensive designer garments and drive super luxury cars. They earn millions of money every yea. Middle class people and teenagers are struggling to make money for coping them. A plethora of teenagers are spending their parent’s money to imitate them and spoiling their academic carrier. Celebrities are human beings too, and they have their own weakness.
To give an evidence, if super star gives up his smoking and drinking alcohol habit, then his followers would benefit from look after these bad habit as well. A number of years back, I lived in a tiny village. There was a teenage boy and his passion was hockey from his childhood. He stared to mime hockey player Will butcher. However, his family unable to manage his objective to became like hockey player Will butcher. The boy was disappointed in entire life. In the society, I see a plenty of young persons influenced by the celebrity’s life.
After analysing this situation, I conclude that admiring and imitating film and sports personalities are tiny hard to make exemplar. The problem begins when you try to imitate everything that they do.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: mojtaba1980
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Unfortunately
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...ry to imitate everything that they do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68753430702 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3020032487 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1764705882 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5882352941 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120063954197 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393744525076 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405405385652 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748765277594 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273273946173 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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