To fascinate a crowd in a store big companies launches myriad numbers of offers and discounts. Some people believe that offers and promotions attract a flock of people cause a huge profit for companies. On the contrary other curtails that company’s reputation is impacted when they put their products on offers. In my opinion promotions and offers should work on coalition with other factors. I would personally advocate on to inset time in special discounts and offers on regular intervals. This will aid in grabbing attention of more consumers. This essay will elaborate, on how marketing strategies should be incorporated to not impact the company reputation.
Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that offer, and discounts attracts people leading them to purchase mort benefitting companies. Popular brands have separate teams for marketing strategy which are eager to discover ways to introduce major promotions and advertise them to lurch people. Often shopping malls are crowed with people when new promotions are advertised. For example, In India shopping stores like Lifestyle often introduces deals to grab the attention of consumers.
Secondly, some people contradict and thinks that when brands are putting their products on offers they are damaging their company reputation. According to their conjecture most of the products which are on sale are either out of fashion or about to expired. With sense of excitement which promotions bring people tend to lose their ability to think and would purchase more.
Hence aforementioned, offer and discounts are good for companies but, companies should focus on incorporating some work on building their image first before launching any offer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ty to think and would purchase more. Hence aforementioned, offer and discounts are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4679245283 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81101935829 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7863503415 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326580073765 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998211837592 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826930749118 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19017756995 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103032948713 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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