Should heritage buildings be preserved? Discuss your views.

Heritage buildings plays a salient role in describing the history of any nations. These buildings are a true treasure which a nation can attain hence, these buildings needs to be preserved and protected against all sort of wear and tear.

Firstly, it is an undeniable that heritage buildings are the true representation and symbol of nations history as these are some of the sites which were probably be created thousands of years back. By looking at these sites we can value and cherish our history and civilisations. The construction of these buildings depicts the internal and delicate structure and aspect of each and every element.

Secondly, preservation of these buildings are highly essential as these sites would act as a great spot for tourist attractions. For example, Taj Mahal in India is a great site for tourist to visit as it tells a tail about the history of one of the most renowned king of Indian history. People from all around the world come and visit this place to glaze at such a picaresque site.
Similar sites all around the world act as a great source of tourism and we economy can gain a lot of money.

These sites are the true value for any nation and hence, protection in terms of renovation is highly vital.

Hence, the foregoing discussion will propound to the views that these sites are true heritage and all heritage needs to be preserved for the good of any country.

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, look, second, secondly, so, for example, sort of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79508196721 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59495821086 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504098360656 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6101480568 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.363636364 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177514085745 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764899152519 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825229935071 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104082886218 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992739667238 0.0609392437508 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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