Marriage before Employment !!

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Marriage before Employment !!

Many young people have the intention of getting married before the completion of their study and attainment of a handsome job. It has been witnessed that the young people are enthusiastic about getting married while the others wait till they are mature enough and are financially stable. This essay will discuss why it is important to finish the study and obtain a good job before getting married.

Young people are sometimes overjoyed by thinking to get married first before the attainment of other important tasks. A high education acquaintance and financial growth are two important aspects to live a satisfactory life. There are bad examples available in front of us where the couple have no idea about the complications and how to deal with them in the near future and their marriage converted into a complete disaster. It is vital for one to be mentally strong and has good capital with him before marriage.

On the other hand, completing the education first and finding a good job serves for a beneficial wedded journey ahead. Money matters the most as it gives the power to obtain anything which is possible through achievement of high categorized employment. There are examples, where the couples are living a beautiful life who invested their critical time initially in doing the good study.

The desires of the young people make them get married at the first point before finishing their study and getting a dignified job. In my view, it is very necessary to get hold of the respectable job through well education like a degree of the engineering or doctors as to live a blessed life ahead.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, in my view, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92279411765 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6311177475 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4763323137 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108537312952 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415842695633 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042161195474 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661662222894 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489424190073 0.0609392437508 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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