The mass media including newspaper, Radio and TV influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
The most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believe that mass media and TV are influence our life. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that mass media including newspaper, Radio and TV influence our society which can not only contribute to change our characters. Through these social media also control our minds and control the society and shape our opinions. It can also lead to numerous other benefits. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by these social media platforms, which can not provide only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but it also enhance the productivity and standard of their life, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities and dedication. It is apparent why many are in favor of the mass media including newspaper, Radio and TV influence our society and shape our opinions.
To conclude that, the benefits of the mass media including newspaper, Radio and TV influence our society and shape our opinions are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...t comes to being effective, but it also enhance the productivity and standard of their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84912280702 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68235000306 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512280701754 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7512759995 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36575753633 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134878126113 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200190352986 0.071462118173 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27239685315 0.151781067708 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156840257277 0.0609392437508 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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