Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
In recent years there has been a colossal (extremely large or great) change in the way
of mass communication thanks to the ubiquity of the state-of-the-art. As such, there
are both merits and demerits to this trend. Although, I am of the view that the former
oust the latter.
A large number of benefits can be attributed to this development. On the one hand, by
utilising such advanced communication tools as Facebook, Twitter and the like, now
media can reach a much broader range of consumers, as they no longer have to rely
on conventional newspapers, magazines. On the other hand with the proliferation of
the Internet and Internet enable devices like notebooks, smart phones, people can
check e-mails, read e-papers and what not, even when they are on the move. Thus,
keeping themselves abreast with the ever changing world.
Another pivotal aspect of this development is that it has enabled different societies
whether they are situated locally or far away, to enlighten each other by sharing their
knowledge in numerous fields, from history and culture to Art and literature. Besides,modern methods of mass communication can augment awareness of a range of
societal usages that can be addressed accordingly. Hence, it is apparent how societybenefits astronomically.
From the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the role of the advent of
modern communication technology in today’s mass media is instrumental indeed, as
it has not only broadened the horizons of individual but has also made them aware of
other societies, cultures and languages, no matter how remote or segregated they are
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...both merits and demerits to this trend. Although, I am of the view that the former oust...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ew that the former oust the latter. A large number of benefits can be attributed to this deve...
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Line 16, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , modern
...d culture to Art and literature. Besides,modern methods of mass communication can augme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32567049808 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11584487833 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2340873357 50.4703680194 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717330599657 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209093721256 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019857845087 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0208613552071 0.151781067708 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272575628728 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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