The means of communicating today has changed markedly over the last ten years. In your opinion, what are the positive and negative impacts of this change?
Communication is one of the field that witnessed great developments in the past century. It has connected relatives in different continents to the same living room or employers in the same meeting room. However, the change in communication trends has also resulted in creating a solitude lifestyle.
To begin with, connecting people across continents has made business and relationships easier than even before. It is one of the perks of a highly advanced communication. For example, a person in USA can communicate with a seller in China to order an electronic device, being in the comfort of his own desk. Hence, advancement in communication has undoubtedly made life much easier for everyone.
In contrast, since most of our communications are restricted to social media, people have drastically reduced their social interactions. Consequently, people have become more isolated. This has created many social and psychological issues like depression, anxiety and isolation. For example, person suffering from depression might end up committing suicide as he/she had no reachable confidant to communicate with at the right time, at the right place.
In conclusion, advancements in communication has brought people closer together simultaneously pulling them apart. It has also drifted people apart drowning them in isolation and depression. Hence, it is the utmost responsibility of the people use communication to their benefit and maintain healthy social relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64573991031 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33742568205 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3684149398 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0827452461049 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028669930595 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330607069385 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499497371525 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227346610123 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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