Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind?
In this modern era, with the help of advancement several benefits of the technology can be identified in every sector such as medical, architecture and others. However, the advancement in medical has changed the way of people living by providing long life. According to my perspective, it is very good for the community with various ways, so I will try to analyze it in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, this progress in the medical sector helps to cure numerous types of diseases which cannot be amazon in life like, cancer, diabetes etc. For example, the cancer is very harmful sickness which could not be cured in the past time but now-a-days, many people have saved their life only due to the latest techniques of the science. Hence, it is only for the benefits of the public.
In additional, as the life is very important for everyone so these technologies are helpful to livelong such as, with this growth many products have produced in the market like the body masses which helps to gain body mass. Researches have shown that many people have become the famous in the world with the growth of science.
To sum up with, everything comes in the market with its own pros and cons meanwhile, medical technology also have many advantages which have been described in this essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ickness which could not be cured in the past time but now-a-days, many people have saved ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84684684685 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55711480646 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8909922843 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.25397266985 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203723807395 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911146992559 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065447383769 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124875217254 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471088914915 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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