It is 100 per cent true that due to advanced medical technology human's life expectancy increased by at least 15 to 20 years. Earlier evan due to a simple cold and cough some people were losing their life. But now with advanced medical technology doctors are able to cure all type of diseases. I am completely agree that the human's life expectancy increased due to advanced medical technology. Throughout this essay, I will discuss it in detail.
To begin with, first and foremost reason of this is that every day new inventions are happening in medical science to provide a better treatment to paitents. Nowadays, we have new machines to diagnose a disease at very early stage like CT scan, MRI to diagnose any brain related disease. New vaccinations are also invented to protect against different viruses. For example, we have polio vaccine to protect physical disability disease.
In addition, now we have hospitals with better equipements and super specialist doctors to provide high quality treatments. Also, we have computer base robotic surgery to perform a complex operation. Laser based surgery with high accuracy is also very popular specially for plastic surgery.
Overall, as discussed in the above paragraphs we can say due to the advanced medical technology average human's life expectancy has been increased significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, at least, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22685185185 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76440841324 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7710364255 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8461538462 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156694450209 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567502713051 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644930597183 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096553406403 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723907152552 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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