Men and Women are equal, but female executive are only 4 out of 100 in top 500 companies of the world.This essay will discuss why government should change policies to equalize female to male ratio on top the position, and it will also discuss effect of making such policies.
Government should enforce law to finish any discrimination against women and provide them equal opportunity. Moreover, law should encourage hardworking women to move along with their career without any gender bias.Survey conducted by research organization shows that women are more hardworking than men, but they do not get the chance to move up due to the gender inequality. Thus, amendment in the constitution will give women a chance to excel in their jobs.
On the other hand, some people believe 50% of top executive positions forced by law would bring demotivate among male employees. Talented men will be out of the race due to this quota system.Recent research study done at University of Canada shows that career growth is one of the major factors of motivation.To sum up, Government should not force laws on high profit organizations that can discourage hardworking and talented men.
This essay discussed why it is necessary to change government policies to give the equal chances to women.However, these policies can discouraging for male workers.In my opinion, government should make policies to eliminate discrimination, keep balance not is numbers but also in the merit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20675105485 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9619411675 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.4854421325 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.285714286 104.977214359 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 20.9669160288 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148379660681 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724603231796 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346277214373 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893714285462 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402101889616 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 12.6369458128 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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