Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. Advantage or disadvantage for young people.
Young people leaving home at an early age has become center of the discussion nowadays. some people, who are proponents, thinks that it has many advantages while others, who are opponents, consider it has numerous disadvantages. this essay will elaborate both viewpoint with examples and ultimately leads to plausible conclusion.
On othe the hand, there are cornucopia of reason in favour of leaving dwelling to study or work abroad but one of conspicuous one stems to the fact that they do not have job and education opportunities at their place. In particular, this condition is mostly in underdeveloped countries. For instance, a painstaking reseach study conducted by emiment scientists claims that pupils gets financial and career benefits by leaving home. Thus, it is considered as good decision.
On the other hand, there are many pitfalls that negate with positve side of the arguments and can certainly overwhelm the potential benefits but one of most alarming rooted to the fact the they disconnect from their social circle and family which create mental problem. For an illustration, a meticulous study published in reputable journal delineated that fourty percent people who leave their home end up having different mental health problems such as depression and anxiety. Hence, it has serious repercussion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39423076923 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90593086146 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.580463131201 118% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4605194787 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267863691049 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860795655002 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115693862645 0.071462118173 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167358278395 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705745940352 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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