More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather
than being face to face.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, people have used different methods of communication, either in their social lives, or in their business. Some people believe that using technology in communication has become more common that traditional face to face meeting, while others argue that face to face meeting is essential and can not be replaced by the advancement in technologies. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communication.
Using technologies either in social or business communication has many advantages. This using enables people to communicate with each others regardless the far distances. For example, people who live in China can talk to people who reside in Jordan without any difficulties, so, this development can enable people performing their businesses throughout the world very easily. Therefore, it seems clear that adopting advancement technologies in communication has a great benefit on social and business life.
On the other, some people think that using these technologies could affect badly on family relationships. Due to these technologies, family members have stopped communicating regularly, and the family gathering has become rare. Recent research, which has conducted in USA, has shown that 95% of family members prefer communicate with their families using Skype or Tango rather than face to face meeting. These people are unaware of the fact that using these technologies are invented for people who live at far distances to help them to communicate easily. Thus, communication using technological devices have a great benefit.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the positive and negative sides of using technologies in communication. In my opinion, I believe that these technologies have a positive impact on both the family members relationships and on the business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63957597173 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16432624446 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4290659314 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362262537977 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148693710235 0.0925447433944 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980304073856 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235133450837 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112318279576 0.0609392437508 184% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.