Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive social welfare from governments in order for them to continue their work.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive social welfare from governments in order for them to continue their work.

Since the beginning of the 21st century, the number of artists has increased significantly and most of them are suffering from difficult situations. Some people believe that artists should receive a financial aid from governments, while others argue that governments have other responsibilities to do rather than helping these artists. This essay will discuss the reasons why governments should help artists through providing them social welfare.

Artists must receive a social welfare from governments because they provide their societies with some services. People feel happy when they visit the exhibitions, where they can see different paintings. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge University, has shown that 92% of people find their happiness by visiting museums and theaters. Therefore, it seems clear that providing the social welfare for the artists is necessary for supporting their efforts.

On the other hand, some people think that governments have other responsibilities to do and there are poor people need the social welfare more than artists. Social welfare should be provided to the poor people not to the artists. But these people are unaware of the fact that most of artists are suffering from difficult circumstances, and they do not earn money for their works, and most of their works are voluntary. Thus, governments should help the artists by providing them a social welfare.

In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why the governments should help the artists and they must support their works. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the governments should allocate charities that provide support to the artists.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the artists') or simply say ''most artists''.
Suggestion: most of the artists; most artists
...ese people are unaware of the fact that most of artists are suffering from difficult circumstan...
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Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es that provide support to the artists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42911877395 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78865093502 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498084291188 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6345686828 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372606957938 0.242375264174 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151551524186 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862692922984 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237793840535 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673166002276 0.0609392437508 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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