: More and more students are studying at universities abroad, either because it is cheaper, or because they feel they can receive a better education, or because it will provide them with greater professional opportunities.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad. Support your arguments with reasons
and or examples from your own experience and observations.
Although this topic, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, the constructive dialogue on whether studying abroad will be more benefical for the students can lead to a thought provoking discussion .my view is that it has better professional opportunities and great experience, and i shall put my forth in this essay.
To commence with, some people believe that the outside universities provide more useful services with appropriate fees and better quality of education it is also important to note that when the student have more qualified education this will lead to better chances of work .For instance a study shows that the number of students who seeks for outside study is increasing and this shows the importance of improving our universities .Thus, the updating is crucial for utilizing this phenomena .
On the other hand, another people believe that studying abroad is dangerous and useless as any student can achieve all the progression besides reaching higher grades from his country and it is vital to observe that while studying abroad we will lose many family relations .
hence, studying abroad has approven it’s importance to both individual and society .
In conclusion, i see equally potential evidence that support the argument i have provided above , hence i believe that the outside study is helpful for developing the society and inserting new ideas because our world today is in a race of technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2974137931 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81711473845 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.5024630542 224% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.415643233 50.4703680194 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.8 104.977214359 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.4 20.9669160288 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8 7.25397266985 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242050626026 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113613361776 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403601744183 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113613361776 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403601744183 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 12.6369458128 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 53.1260098522 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.9458128079 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.3980295567 196% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.5123152709 276% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.