More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in extinction of wild animals. There are a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. This situation can be remedied by providing some effective measures.
There are numerous reasons accountable for this soaring concern. The most preponderant is that the increasing of deforestation due to overpopulation. The increase in population tends to increase deforestation. The human need land to live and for this purpose they start to expand their living area. For example, there were forests near my city which was habitat for wild animals, but now it has been cut out and high rise apartments are been built.
Steps to deal with this problem are many. The most effective ones are not remote and complicated, but accessible and practicable. The primary one lies in the fact that the government should declare some forests area as Natural Park in which the wild animals such as lions and snakes resides. Besides, government should help the NGO’s by funding them to take care of the wild animals affected by human activities. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured can we expect to see a considerable progress in overcoming this soaring concern.
To conclude, dealing with the extinction of wild animals the government should take preventive measures to protect the habitat of wild animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'forests'' or 'forest's'?
Suggestion: forests'; forest's
...that the government should declare some forests area as Natural Park in which the wild ...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
...ectors are ensured can we expect to see a considerable progress in overcoming this soaring concern. To...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to protect the habitat of wild animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1347826087 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86105787672 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7349163825 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3571428571 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230252932754 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775431447613 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552848511487 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139865626584 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304128759242 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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