These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about liquor drinking, if it should be viewed as positive or negative impact to the society. While it is possible to claim that liquor provides many detrimental effects to alcoholics, my view is that disadvantages of liquor outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing the issue.
There are several reasons why allowing liquor selling legally is considered to disadvantageous to society. One of them is that a person losses his sense when liquor consumption. It can also be argued that alcohol is considered to be the most controversial beverage of recent times especially among teenagers. It can also taken in to account that it is necessary to have strict control on the sale of alcohol, place of sale, age of person and permit for sale.
Those who oppose this issue have a different kind of view that it can be actually a notable thing. Firstly, it is claimed that ban on alcohol sale will reduce the income earned from alcohol sale and It will affect the economy as well.
In conclusion while there are strong arguments on the both sides of the case, my opinion is that ban on alcohol is not the correct choice but implementation of strict rules and regulations on the sale will reduce the problems of alcohol.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tive or negative impact to the society. While it is possible to claim that liquor pro...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...outweigh the advantages. In this essay, i shall explain my point of view by analy...
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... the income earned from alcohol sale and It will affect the economy also. In ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ol sale and It will affect the economy also. In conclusion while there are stro...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ments on the both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that ban on alcohol is not the corre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80263157895 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70537963091 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6773057919 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307504592266 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11002931173 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479799939198 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164482201565 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576566325438 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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