The problem of fast food is an issue that has been brought up by many people in the past, and if it should be viewed as a positive or negative impact to the people. While it is possible to claim that fast food provides a lot of problems, let us analyze this topic to consider the underlying causes and shed light on the best solution available.
First of all, there are various root causes that need to be taken into consideration, when we talk about the problem of fast food. These include lack of nutrition so that it does not provide any nourishment to body, and fast food contains harmful food additives and preservatives to increase the taste and texture.
Secondly, there are also increased instances of problems such as high level of obesity, diabetes, and cardio-vascular disease.
However, it also needs to be taken into consideration that fast food provides some kind of benefits such as it reduces our waiting time for food, and it is cheaper than homemade meals.
In conclusion, such conscious and collective steps can be taken by people so that we can get a healthy food. Consequentl,y this will reduce the problems of fast food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...itive or negative impact to the people. While it is possible to claim that fast food ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'roots'?
Suggestion: roots
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Suggestion: , y
...t we can get a healthy food. Consequentl,y this will reduce the problems of fast f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 200.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.765 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70221668265 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7813851293 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312938312409 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140989016757 0.0925447433944 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893427795844 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169641553741 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866412346886 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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