One of the conspicuous trends today's world is colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that most modern families both parents working has bad effects of children life and education life.There is a widespread worry that this will lead to myriad of concern in one's life. however, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in my essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that when both parents are working then economic growth of family is very quickly and there are numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only one advantage more when it comes to being effective, bur they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much case, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Beside, when only one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such attributes as dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of both parents working is good for economic growth of family. In the views of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of both parents working are indeed too great to ignore.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... children life and their education life.There is a widespread worry that this will le...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... this will lead to myriad of concern in ones life. however, I do not entirely accept...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...lead to myriad of concern in ones life. however, I do not entirely accept this and i wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ever, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in my essay. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his and i will explain why in my essay. There are a number of arguments in favor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal factor in the aforementi...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
...varied areas. Beside, when only one can follows such a system, can they broaden their h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is good for economic growth of family. In the views of the arguments outlined a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85425101215 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63080648893 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1819594505 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213718880123 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765071118833 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641292243756 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145301179338 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334953556137 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... children life and their education life.There is a widespread worry that this will le...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... this will lead to myriad of concern in ones life. however, I do not entirely accept...
^^^^
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...lead to myriad of concern in ones life. however, I do not entirely accept this and i wi...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ever, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in my essay. ...
^
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his and i will explain why in my essay. There are a number of arguments in favor...
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Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal factor in the aforementi...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
...varied areas. Beside, when only one can follows such a system, can they broaden their h...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is good for economic growth of family. In the views of the arguments outlined a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85425101215 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63080648893 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1819594505 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213718880123 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765071118833 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641292243756 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145301179338 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334953556137 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.