Education is important as it teach ethics and life value as it teaches us practical things for future employment What is your opinion

One of the conspicuous trends today's world is colossal upsurge in number of people believing that in the cashless society people use more credit cards are very bad effect on financial situation. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in my essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that the purpose of education is lead to self- fulfillment and there are numerous other benefits in various field. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting of chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned in the proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Beside, when only one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning attributes as dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of uses of credit cards.
In the views of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of people using credit cards are indeed too great to ignore.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...is will lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79583333333 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67589224476 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3272248444 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.25397266985 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0148837210691 0.242375264174 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00688172837377 0.0925447433944 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0146804399313 0.071462118173 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00808048236965 0.151781067708 5% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00812577456678 0.0609392437508 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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