“Normal” societal roles for women include taking care of the children in the household. But now that women contribute equally in outdoor responsibilities, it would be a little unfair to expect the same amount of dedication towards the upbringing of the children.
Is it okay for men to participate and share the responsibilities of the house and make their presence be felt more in their children's life, or should the mothers be solely responsible?
In modern era,there is an on going deliberation among people on the role of women because women also contribute the economy as men do. While some people argue that disadvantages of women employment overweigh the advantages. On my point of view, both men and women have to take the responsibilities of the house. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in favour to my argument.
First and foremost, if men are willing to take some part of the household responsibilities on to their shoulders women will be able to contribute to increase their household income either by engaging in a job or in an own business. Apart from that, women are encouraged in pursuading on higher studies which can boost innovations. Therefore, men should be trained on household activities from their childhood.
On the other hand, if men takes thehousehold responsibilities the mother oriented family unit will be affected severly, which is the foundation of asian society. However, if both the parties takes the responsibilies of their children, they will be more comfortable to share their feelings with their parents. Besides that, they can inherent good qualities from both of their parents.
In conclusion, it is recommended to promote this concept specially in third world countries because this is one of the rigid barriers which Asian women are facing in. In nutshell, it is also beleived that organizations such as UNDP can involve in making this concept popular, together with government intevention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
In modern era,there is an on going deliberation among peopl...
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Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
In modern era,there is an on going deliberation among people on the role o...
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Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... also contribute the economy as men do. While some people argue that disadvantages of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, third, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18595041322 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06708734688 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5992384393 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150166547476 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558454682951 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433726567079 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089271365408 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487644683826 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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