Some democrats claim that people who do not take part in voting processes do not have the right to complaint about the situation their communities are in. What is your position regarding this opinion?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on parliamentary democracy. While some people argue on making voting compulsory and others argue of its adverse impacts. On my point of view, I do not agree on compulsory voting system, because it is human''s right to vote or not. In this essay, I shall discuss on the matters facing by the people who do not vote, because some democrats state that they do not have the right to claim their concerns just because they did not vote.
First and foremost, there are instances where people refuse in voting such as there''s no person they trust on. According to my experience, I have seen most of the time people in developing countries do not cast their votes since they are fed up with the prevailing systems and politicians. In that scenario, politicians cannot influence them to cast there votes. At the same time, some people may not be available to cast their vote since they are working in abroad, in such circumstances it is not fair to avoid their concerns based on that criterion.
On the other hand, some democrats expect to implement laws on compulsory voting, in order to get representation from all the categories of the society. However, we have seen in some countries people do not keep trust in the election system due to corruption and illegal activities.
In conclusion, it is advised not to implement compulsory voting before changing the attitudes of the people. It is also believed, that some people do not have sufficient knowledge in deciding the party or a person to vote. In such circumstances, it is not fair to implement this method as well. Finally, it is the government bears the discretion of deciding on the above mentioned issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80536912752 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73036433821 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520134228188 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.65517241379 301% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5417396403 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307387956764 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100689675306 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869970816377 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183808671526 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747736521527 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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