Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
These days it has become a growing trend to see an upsurge in age discrimination in any
company. In my opinion, this trend gives birth to greater concerns, which will be explored
below.
The drawbacks of this practice are manifold. The salient one is that young people are often
immature and cannot handle too much pressure at work. Not only do they fail to cope with
tremendous work pressure, but they also fail to take appropriate decision, which can be
sometimes harmful for the company. There is no doubt that a company needs those
employees who have plenty of knowledge and experience in their own field. Needless to
say, it is the senior employees who can keep the company in a preponderant position, in
terms of its productivity.
Another important aspect of age discrimination is that it will not be an easy task for
employers to train the younger employees. This will cost time and money. On the contrary,
experienced employees need no training except in modern technologies, which should not
be a big concern at all. Hence, it is apparent why many are against favoring young
employees in a company.
To conclude, it is evident from the above discussion that no matter how energetic
youngsters are, old employees deserve greater attention and respect, as they are more
effective for the development of any company.
- Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age. In the workplace, there are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44939271255 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98475311674 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655870445344 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.917268582 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0404009897622 0.242375264174 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176440804099 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229692510223 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0280590595896 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027813936802 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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