Nowadays age discrimination in any company has become a common trend. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Most of the companies nowadays prefer young employees.The belief that young people are good with technology, easy to mould and are quick learner is only contributing in increasing their demand in the corporate sectors.this has lead to a new type of discrimation called age discrimination in office space.this developmeent in my opinion is negative. this essay will further look into this topic into detail.
First and foremost,old employers are like treasures of company. The old people carry with themselves years of experience which can be used by the employers for the growth of company.Also aged people are more experienced in handling the pressure situation.Unlike the young generation which are at times incapable of handling the high pressure demands of their work.Hence, combining a team which consist of mix of both is going to yield good results for company.
Furthermore,with changing times it is important to have employees which are well versed with the new way of working. Since young people are more comfortable in learning the changing technology companies should start an initiative where the old employers of the company are given regular sessions by these young employer to help them learn the new ways of work. this way they will be able to contribute to the companies success.
Hence I strongly believe that a combination of mix work force will do wonders for a compnay.More and more initiatives should be taken by companies to retain their old work force along with young employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, look, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20491803279 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03266503964 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581967213115 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.00974962 50.4703680194 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.75 104.977214359 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07576256525 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315631006524 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307701490326 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483562876141 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224133497952 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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