Nowadays large shopping malls are taking over small businesses and local shops? Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is the colossal upsurge in how large shopping malls are taking over small businesses. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the society. In my opinion, large shopping malls have more negative impacts than positives in the society.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefits of large shopping malls is the variety of products and services. For example, customers unlike in the past have now more products and services as shopping malls have more brands under one roof.
On the other hand, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. one of the most preponderant one is that large shopping malls have some negative consequences for the community in various ways. Firstly, people waste more time and money because they get roped into buying things they do not need. according to "times magazine December 2017 edition", the proportion of people wasting their time and money in large shopping malls have increased from 10 percent to 90 percent today. Secondly, a large portion of the small local businesses are suffering because large shop[ping malls have more features and facilities.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking a great initiative in educating its customers on the impact of large shopping malls taking over small businesses. customers are being encouraged to spend significant portion of their time in shopping according to their needs in order to compensate for the problems.
In view of the argumentsoutlines above, one can conclude that despite having some benefits, the drawbacks of the large shopping malls in the society are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10380622837 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72618688322 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491349480969 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7293849285 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352227757498 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137280647293 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103998300629 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207517461117 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560552163611 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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